Wednesday, February 2, 2011

"थोडा और"

ताउम्र  गिने  मैंने  अनगिनत कदम  मेरे, किन्तु हर  बार  तय  करने  को  एक  लम्बी  दूरी  बची  रही ......
सपने  जिस  जिस  दिन  पूरे  हुए, उस  उस  रात  नए  सपनों  की  तलाश  में  बोझिल  आँखें  खुली  रही ...

पिसता  रहा  हर  पल  ख़ुशी  की  आरज़ू  में, जब  मिली  भी  तो  नयी  उम्मीदों  के  बोझ  तले  दबी  हुई ...
चाहा  जिन  अपनों  को, वो  तो  हैं  दूर  कहीं, मेरे  हिस्से  आई  बस  चंद तस्वीरें मेज़  पे  सजी  हुई ....

दूसरों  की  ख़ुशी  से  मोहब्बत  की  मैंने  बेपनाह, पर  मेरी  हर  मंजिल, हर  डगर  बेवफा  निकली ....
ज़रा  अपनी  ज़िन्दगी  को  कुछ  लम्हे  दे  दूं अब, वो  कोसती  है, पूछती  है  उसे  किस  गुनाह  की  सजा  मिली.

गम  कभी  खत्म नहीं  हुआ, वक़्त  रुका  नहीं , न  बदली  मन  की "थोडा  और " चाहने  की  फितरत  ....
अब  करना  है  बस  वो  जो  चाहत  है  मेरी, चाहे  ठुकरा  दे  दुनिया , चाहे  खिलाफ  हो जाये किस्मत .....

आशा है आप मेरे साथ होंगें

10 comments:

  1. Main uska hu vo is ahsaas se inkar karta h...
    Bhari mahfile me bhi ruswa mujhe har bar karta h...
    yakin h sari duniya ko khafa h mujhse vo lekin...
    mujhe fir bhi yakeen h vo mujhi se pyar karta h...

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  2. @Ravi: kafi wajan h lines me....but nyc1.. :)
    @YJ: gud1... :)

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  3. Bhai bahut mast thi... but as usual 2 bar main clear hui and 3 time samajh main aa gyi.. :):) Aise hi kuch ideas main bhi apne blog main likhne waala tha but obviously not in poetry form but in my characteristic form , i.e. SHORT PARA.. :)

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  4. I have lot many things 2 say after reading dis..
    1.
    poem padhne se pehle mene yj ka comment dekha.(didn't read)just dekha.phir meri nazar ravi k comment pe gyi,"@YJ : Awesome Lines... " suddenly mujhe DD1 ka scene yaad aa gya jisme ek poet dusre poet ki tarif karta h.. unki bhi majburi h koi aur tarif karta nhi to khud hi apas me kar lete hain.
    2.
    Anyway i went on with the post.. and as i read through it i felt like "@Ravi : Awesome Lines... " :) u were a poet n v didn't even know it ;). but sahi me mast h.
    3.
    Hope You Will Be There .......... I didnt get dis.. needs a clarfication.
    4.@yj its gud. bt more is expected 4rm u ;) just kidding. gud 1 :)

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  5. @Swapnil,Goa, Arti,Sardaar and Adie : Thanks for the comments :)

    @pritam : Ek baar me toh mujhe pata nhi padta ..kya likh gya main....tujhe kaha samjh aayegi :P

    Waise reason is shayad ..Hindi k words ko English me likhta hu na isliye problem aati h.

    @ adie :
    For (3) - Expecting Someone Special to be there even if most of the ordinary janta will not be there to support.

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  6. @adi -
    "Ishq me buri niyat se kuch kiya nahi jata...
    Kaha jata hai use bewafa samjha nahi jata..."

    @ravi -
    Those who r there to support will become someone special... :)
    and dont bother about ordinary janta... tujhe to pata h na jab tak hum log h tab tak Janta ki .... (bhavnao ko jyada mat samajhna...)

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